Two-Shekel's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smooth Ecstasy]

great

i love the lyrics as usual

ur a master at them

i think p-ballas right
dub effects would fix ur delivery problems

awesome beat too

best track ive heard from u yet

keep it up man

Two-Shekel
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"Justice league unite for a loooooooow score" -What the Fuck???

OBIEakaAO responds:

Thanks for the positive review! im in the process of re-mastering it. i dont know what the fuck justice league is, stupid ass shit. haha idk. look out for my next track comin out soon!

[[ f ] Hit 'Em Hard]

pretty cool

for the first time, good title =D lol

really cool drums
tabla sounds crazy when playing along with the standard drums

cool use of tremolo strings
tho something about melody isnt right
sounds a little too light for me

altogether tho, hot track
particularly the drums,

keep on droppin hits,

Two-Shekel
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flashmac responds:

Thank for the review. Your right, the melody is a bit soft for the hard drums. I'll make sure to make the melody harder when I finish it.

[AGANG - Da Invasion]

ha ha LOL

ur making fun of P-balla for fake accounts?!

ur the fucking king of fake accounts

and u make fun of him for being scared?!

who blocks every little girl who might beat him up

and "we run this shit"?!
what do YOU run?

Lejin responds:

LOOOOOL!!! n***as would kill you out here cracker GIT MAAAAAD!!!!

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHHAHAhah ahHHAhaHhahaH

<<BANG>>KO!!!

we run thing shit!!!

the truth hurts! git maaaaaaaaaad!

[When Thugz Cry]

same problems, same qualities

again i say what phaded said this time
and those other times

again the lyrics are the shit
ur flow is great
and the beat happens to be pretty good

work on that issue of delivery and ull own the charts man

keep it up man
youv got serious skills

"on a lyrical level i'm Jay-Z"
ur gettin' there man

Shek

OBIEakaAO responds:

thank you sir

[DJBobHoskins-East Riding Love]

damn

this is so catchy
absolutely love it

catchier than california love

mabye..

honestly its at its best when its at its simplest moments

DL
10/10
5/5

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DJBobHoskins responds:

Cool! Thanks for downloading it! Nice review, thanks a lot.

[Please Rescue Me]

nice

what i said is sort of what Jules-Paxton
was saying

but once again the lyrics, and flow are hot
plus the beat helps

i love that part around 1:43,
"moment flows and anticipation relations overstood graces and cases
so hatin' is understated"

went over my head, but sound cool

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OBIEakaAO responds:

thank you again for the good review! i love good constructive critisism. the line goes .
'A passionate moment frozen in anticipation
relataions over-stood gracious encasings
so hatin is understated in guidelines to facing...'

its like, you are in a moment waiting for something to happen so bad and you understand so well everything that is going on but your emotions are kept encased within you and you end up hating the fact you cant just let yourself go and express exactly what you want to.

[Starry Night [Unfinished]]

amazing

absolutely great,
i have a friend whos a pretty good singer

mabye she can sing on this

either way, this is great

amazing melody, excellent melody, awesome melody

and hot drums

this is the shit

DL
5/5
10/10
FV

shek

TheMerelyHuman responds:

Thanks for the compliments and the offer but I'm planning to sing on this myself actually.

[I Am The Boss]

mixed review

the beats great,
and the flow and lyrics are pretty good

the problem is ur style of rapping
its too quiet and emotional

dont let that hold u back tho
ur already showin up a huge amount of the rappers on ng

shek

OBIEakaAO responds:

First, thank you for the review, i always app cons. critisism! Second, i'm a little unsure about what you mean when you say im too "quiet and emotional". I just dont get it i guess, PM me and maybe let me know? Thanks for the pos review!!

[[ f ] Shattered Hopes]

great

melodically its ur best piece ever

but sometimes the synths get a little too heavy for it to be a great piece
to rap on

still tho, orchestrally awesome

mabye keep it simpler sometimes, but i love it.

uve totally come up
ur getting a shitload better each track
keep it up and ur gonna be a regular front pager

-shek

flashmac responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah I also think this is one of my best tracks melody wise. But when I made this track, I didn't make it for lyrics. That's why you got the heavy synths. Glad you like it anyway.

[[ f ] Pimpilicious]

cool

this is hot man

10 worthy and i really dont give alot of those

absolutely particularly when u break down the beat

stay up
-shek

flashmac responds:

Thanks for the 10 man. I feel really accomplished now, lol. Thanks for the review.